Writing Task 2建議程度 7.0-8.0#work#economy#wellbeing#productivity
A number of organisations in various countries have trialled a four-day working week, in which employees work one fewer day per week while retaining their full salary. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
追問延伸
- ・Which industries or professions might find it most difficult to implement a four-day working week, and why?
- ・In what ways could a reduction in mandatory working hours influence gender equality within the workplace?
- ・What forms of evidence would be most persuasive in convincing large corporations to permanently adopt a four-day working week?
🐧 Lumi 的作答建議 — Advantages/Disadvantages 題型
- ・先確認題目問的是「純粹討論優缺點」還是「優缺點+你的意見」,兩種寫法段落配置不同
- ・優點、缺點各一段,避免優點寫五個缺點只寫一個的失衡狀況
- ・用比較句型(whereas / in contrast / on the other hand)串接優缺點會讓 Coherence 分數更好看
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