Writing Task 2建議程度 5.0-6.0#technology#education#health
Many children today spend a large amount of time playing video games. Do the advantages of this activity outweigh the disadvantages?
追問延伸
- ・What responsibilities do parents have in managing their children's screen time?
- ・Can video games have educational benefits?
🐧 Lumi 的作答建議 — Advantages/Disadvantages 題型
- ・先確認題目問的是「純粹討論優缺點」還是「優缺點+你的意見」，兩種寫法段落配置不同
- ・優點、缺點各一段，避免優點寫五個缺點只寫一個的失衡狀況
- ・用比較句型（whereas / in contrast / on the other hand）串接優缺點會讓 Coherence 分數更好看
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