Writing Task 2建議程度 5.0-6.0#education#parenting#child-development

Some parents choose to educate their children at home instead of sending them to school. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

追問延伸
  • How might homeschooling affect a child's ability to develop social skills and make friends?
  • What qualities should a parent ideally have in order to homeschool effectively?
  • Should governments introduce regulations to ensure the quality of homeschooling? Why or why not?
🐧 Lumi 的作答建議 — Advantages/Disadvantages 題型
  • 先確認題目問的是「純粹討論優缺點」還是「優缺點+你的意見」,兩種寫法段落配置不同
  • 優點、缺點各一段,避免優點寫五個缺點只寫一個的失衡狀況
  • 用比較句型(whereas / in contrast / on the other hand)串接優缺點會讓 Coherence 分數更好看
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