Writing Task 2建議程度 6.0-7.0#urbanisation#economy#society#environment

Many people from rural areas are migrating to large cities in search of better employment opportunities and improved living standards. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

追問延伸
  • What problems can rapid and unplanned urbanisation create for a city's infrastructure and public services?
  • How does large-scale rural-to-urban migration affect the communities and regions that people leave behind?
  • What policies could governments implement to make rural areas more economically attractive to young people?
🐧 Lumi 的作答建議 — Advantages/Disadvantages 題型
  • 先確認題目問的是「純粹討論優缺點」還是「優缺點+你的意見」,兩種寫法段落配置不同
  • 優點、缺點各一段,避免優點寫五個缺點只寫一個的失衡狀況
  • 用比較句型(whereas / in contrast / on the other hand)串接優缺點會讓 Coherence 分數更好看
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