Writing Task 2建議程度 7.0-8.0#society#economy#technology#financial-inclusion

Many governments and financial institutions are actively promoting a transition toward a cashless society in which all financial transactions are conducted through digital means. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

追問延伸
  • Which demographic groups are most at risk of being economically excluded in a fully cashless financial system?
  • How might a cashless economy alter the capacity of governments and regulatory bodies to monitor financial transactions?
  • What cybersecurity vulnerabilities does a society face when all transactions depend on digital infrastructure, and how might these be addressed?
🐧 Lumi 的作答建議 — Advantages/Disadvantages 題型
  • 先確認題目問的是「純粹討論優缺點」還是「優缺點+你的意見」,兩種寫法段落配置不同
  • 優點、缺點各一段,避免優點寫五個缺點只寫一個的失衡狀況
  • 用比較句型(whereas / in contrast / on the other hand)串接優缺點會讓 Coherence 分數更好看
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