Writing Task 2建議程度 6.0-7.0#health#society#youth#wellbeing

Mental health problems such as depression and anxiety have become increasingly common in modern societies, particularly among young people. What factors do you think are responsible for this rise? What measures could be implemented to improve mental wellbeing across communities?

追問延伸
  • Should mental health education be made a compulsory subject in secondary schools?
  • How has the stigma around mental illness changed over the past few decades?
  • To what extent is social media responsible for declining mental health in young people?
🐧 Lumi 的作答建議 — 雙問題題型(What problems...what measures)
  • 兩個問題各自獨立成段,不要混在一起寫
  • 第二段的「解方」要對應第一段提到的「問題」,不要答非所問
  • 可用 Task Response 檢查表:每個子問題都有直接回答到嗎?
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