Writing Task 2建議程度 5.0-6.0#work#technology#lifestyle#mental-health

Many companies now allow their employees to work from home instead of coming into the office every day. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

追問延伸
  • What types of jobs are most and least suited to remote working arrangements?
  • How might working from home over a long period affect employees' mental health?
  • What challenges do managers face when leading teams that work remotely?
🐧 Lumi 的作答建議 — Advantages/Disadvantages 題型
  • 先確認題目問的是「純粹討論優缺點」還是「優缺點+你的意見」,兩種寫法段落配置不同
  • 優點、缺點各一段,避免優點寫五個缺點只寫一個的失衡狀況
  • 用比較句型(whereas / in contrast / on the other hand)串接優缺點會讓 Coherence 分數更好看
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