Writing Task 2建議程度 5.0-6.0#health#lifestyle#diet

Obesity rates have risen dramatically in both developed and developing nations over the past few decades, placing enormous strain on public health systems. What are the causes of this problem? What measures could be taken to solve it?

追問延伸
  • Should governments tax sugary drinks and junk food to discourage consumption?
  • How much personal responsibility should individuals bear for their own weight?
  • Can schools alone make a significant difference in tackling childhood obesity?
🐧 Lumi 的作答建議 — Problem/Solution 題型
  • 問題段落要具體(不要只說 pollution is bad,要說明造成什麼具體影響)
  • 每個解方最好對應到前面提到的某個問題,形成一一對應的邏輯
  • 解方要務實可行,避免寫出過於理想化、無法執行的建議
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