Writing Task 2建議程度 7.0-8.0#environment#agriculture#technology#food-security

Urban vertical farming — the practice of cultivating crops inside multi-storey indoor facilities located within city boundaries — is being promoted as a sustainable response to global food security challenges. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

追問延伸
  • How might the normalisation of vertical farming alter the relationship between urban populations and the origin of their food?
  • What economic and logistical barriers currently prevent vertical farming from becoming a mainstream food production method?
  • To what extent can vertical farming realistically supplement or replace conventional open-field agriculture?
🐧 Lumi 的作答建議 — Advantages/Disadvantages 題型
  • 先確認題目問的是「純粹討論優缺點」還是「優缺點+你的意見」,兩種寫法段落配置不同
  • 優點、缺點各一段,避免優點寫五個缺點只寫一個的失衡狀況
  • 用比較句型(whereas / in contrast / on the other hand)串接優缺點會讓 Coherence 分數更好看
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