Writing Task 2建議程度 5.0-6.0#technology#consumer-behaviour#economy#society
In many countries, people now buy everyday items such as food, clothing, and electronics through online shopping platforms rather than visiting physical stores. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
追問延伸
- ・How has the rise of e-commerce affected workers in traditional retail industries?
- ・What measures can governments take to support small local businesses affected by online shopping?
- ・Do you think physical shops will completely disappear in the future? Why or why not?
🐧 Lumi 的作答建議 — Advantages/Disadvantages 題型
- ・先確認題目問的是「純粹討論優缺點」還是「優缺點+你的意見」，兩種寫法段落配置不同
- ・優點、缺點各一段，避免優點寫五個缺點只寫一個的失衡狀況
- ・用比較句型（whereas / in contrast / on the other hand）串接優缺點會讓 Coherence 分數更好看
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